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Cool

"It's a great story, can't really say much else."

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Eternal Love

"I loved the concept,the characters and it’s own history of realism but what I did dislike was the constant overuse of punctuations they shouldn’t be there,words that just don’t go in the same sentence,extensive pauses and zero spacing "

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Suberbly Ambitious Plot

"The plot is ambitious with unique flare setting up a very interesting concept for a story. The characters stakes are well thought out and, for a work-in-progress, I very much look forward to reading more. "

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