Great idea, maybe could use some editing

"The plot is really interesting and had me wanting to learn more. However, I found it can get a little confusing. Specially with the change between memories and present events without a warning! Maybe you can add something that indicates that change. For example: in chapter 2, the protagonist is running away in panic. Then he suddenly looks up and starts talking to an archivist. That change there had me re-reading the same bit three times in order to understand what was happening. This repeats itself a few times over the next chapters. Punctuation can use some revision as well. Going to be reading more soon! Cheers."