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Not your average story

"I loved it. Not the usual type of story I read but I really enjoyed it. Cami Jo is the ultimate housewife and at home mom. Perfect little family and neighborhood. "

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Great vocabulary

"Really did enjoy this. Haven't read it all but will do. Love the style and vocabulary. Great work "

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Ohh fbbbjb

"Love it great book can’t wait too read more "

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Neighborhood watch

"I enjoyed this book. I hope you continue to write in the future"

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The Classic Mystery

"I love the writing style and Author's eye for minute details making ordinary things of life interesting. One goes on reading without paying attention to any plot. It is as interesting as the Female Protagonist's paintings. Though it is situated in USA but could be as well as happening in the UK. I haven't yet reached the end but can congratulate the Author. Bravo! "

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Mayhem in Suburbia

"Timeless, Classy, Soccer Mom turned Sleuth Descriptive, at times Hilarious but ñevertheless Heartwarming Good job, Author👍👍"

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Neighborhood watch

"I like the story it was very exciting and an good story can't wait to get to the end"

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I LOVED it

"I highly recommend it"

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Very enjoyable!

"I really enjoyed this story. Felt drawn to Cami as a genuine person. Great characters with funny honest perspective. Many subplots made this continually interesting. I was never bored and thought the overall plot was intriguing. I do wish that some elements had been excluded, such as some extraneous body part descriptions and crude language. I didn't feel that it added anything to the storyline. But overall this was very well done. "

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Enjoyed it!

"Not really a big surprise at the end, but it's pretty well written and fun. I liked the characters - they were more developed than in some successful published books I've read. A few typos but I've seen that in published books in the last few years."

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quite good!

"Enjoyable book with a very clear voice. Well-written and compelling, although sometimes the prose could be a tad bit overbearing. But overall very good, I would read more from this author."

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