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Take Your Last Sleep

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Summary

Olivia has been invited to her best friend's birthday sleepover with four over people. But it goes wrong when Olivia's best friend dies. Three suspects, 18 hours, One murder. Can Olivia find the murderer? Or will it be too late?

Status
Complete
Chapters
8
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

The cold, Icy snow hit Olivia's Face, she shivered looking forward To seeing her Best friend Mia. Her smoothe brown hair whipped her face, as she tucked her hair behind her ear. 'Olivia, come on now!' Her dad yelled 'coming dad,' she replied. Olivia opened the car door and sat down, never had she felt so exited. Olivia new Mia her whole life only recently she had moved to Crownsbury. She shut her eyes and smiled, her heart suddenly calmed down, warm and fuzzy remembering when they were in nursery when they were four Olivia couldn't believe it, ten years since they had been in nursery.


She opened her eyes and saw Mia's long black hair flow behind her as she ran to Olivia's Dad's car, smiling. 'Hello Ma'am,' Mia said in a posh voice, 'Good day to you,' Olivia smiled and hoped out the car 'Goodbye dad!' the girls ran into Mia's house. 'Olivia meet Bea, Bea meet Olivia,' 'Hi!' Bea said sweetly 'nice to meet you,' Olivia sighed. 'nice to meet you too,' she said sarcastically, Mia nugged her and whisperd 'why the sarcasm?'. 'Come on Guys, let me show you my room!' Olivia, Mia and Bea walked up the narrow stair case 'We are here!' Mia said excitedly. The door was tall and hot pink with a sticker saying 'Mia's Room' Mia herself was tall. She opened the door. Olivia bugged past Bea scowling at her stepping into the room.


The room was covered in pink, too much pink for Olivia to cope with. A deathing sound of a door bell rang killing Olivia's ears 'Wait here I'll go greet the guests' Mia said quickly racing down stairs Olivia and Bea looked at each other awkwardly and blincked they could hear a distant 'Lola, Luna welcome' coming from Mia.






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