Fantastic start! Obsessed!

"I really like the genre of this story. It has just started, it's not even really a story yet, but the setup is fantastic. I really loved the description. I felt hooked in the short chapter. I felt like it was greatly showing emotions, and characters. There were a few grammatical errors, but any story will have those. Overall, very impressive. I am going to be watching this one for more. I envy your talents. You are an incredible writer, and I hope you continue to write! I wish you all the best in the future!"