What is your opinion?
A roller coaster of mysterious events.
"This is a magnificent short story! I describe it as a roller coaster of mysterious events. You may need to read it several times to understand some of the details the writer wants to keep your attention on. Who was the guy in the lobby's asylum? And what was in the box? The story is entertaining, intriguing, and mysterious. I hope to continue reading more stories from the author."
Nice story
"I loved the description on the characters, and emotions. I could feel like I could imagine the characters exactly. One thing I did notice, was that it was hard for me to understand the setting. There were some confusing parts. Another thing was that I felt like it was much to short. I was surprised that it was only one chapter. It felt like there was more to it, and wasn't really lengthy enough for me. But that is just my take. One of the things you did really well, was creating a good theme for the story. There was a good feel to it that I liked. I wanted to keep reading! Other then that, an enjoyable read. Those things are just suggestions. I'm not going to force them on to you, but those things I feel will just make the story better. Overall, very well written, and I hope you continue writing! I wish you all the best!"
