What is your opinion?
Bad ass story
"Don't like the cover and that's my only complaint. The story and the mc make this a ride-or-die book and I'm in fully strapped! Loved the action and the plot. Truly felt like I was reading a female Rick Riordan piece. The author gets the feel of what camp half blood is supposed to be with the students and the adventures. Plus being a demi-god is always a great lead for any story. Felt like I was back in highschool."
I really want to like it....
"I only know PJO by the movies but they were very enjoyable so I was excited to read an original rendition of the story especially know that the PJO universe is heavy rooted in greek mythology. I enjoy the premise but the execution... The things I did enjoy while reading was the establishment of Willow and Evelyn's lives and how they were different from one another. I do wish we got to see more of their family dynamics, though. I also liked the introduction to their powers and the little hints of what they're capable of. I was a bit confused on the plot point of how they got to camp halfblood and what actions took place during that time. I had hoped the plot would be better paced I think the beginning was a tad rushed and the chapters are possibly too short but that's okay. This story needs tweaking and I'm sure with a lot of time and effort it can turn into a really good story with a good pace and a more comprehensive writing style. I hope this doesn't discourage the authors as I do see their writing potential so I do want to encourage them to keep practicing and keep writing! The more a person writes the better they become and one day I'm sure you'll get one of your works"
