Acidic Paradise

Kelley: Love the story line! Ryder needs to getvhiavhead out of his ass tho!

jo987_123: This is a good story, but it needs a good editor to go through this iteration and fix the mistakes. The pov changes from 1st person to 3rd person, often, and sometimes within one sentence. It needs a liberal sprinkling of punctuation marks throughout, and a decision needs to be made about the char...

fathiahmosebolatan: Nothing is wrong with

mutondimaluleke: Amazing story, loved every bit of it. I definitely recommend

Evodia Naah: I love this and honestly I didn’t want it to end🤗Absolutely worth the read!!

Biva: Quite good for a novella. Impressive writing style and we'll edited. Just one thing- Karla keeps referring herself to a stray cat and while at first it makes sense the analogy gets stale after a while.

Fah🖤🖤dah: Great chemistry, an interesting plot, and characters you can’t help but get attached to. I really enjoyed this story! ❤️‍🔥

Brillen: Feedback

Saraa: Hey! I really enjoyed your story. It made me wonder how you actually write. Are you someone who plans everything in advance, or do you discover the story as the chapters unfold?