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Mr.Simrnoff
"I like the plot of this story, and I like the characters so far for the most part, but it does need some editing. Some sentences don't make sense and need to be rewritten correctly, and the sentence structure and Grammer could use work. I really hope the author will continue with this story because I believe it could be a really good one if author puts the time in! Plzzz finish it, it doesn't have to be a 200 chapter drag on and on that ppl get bored with, but just a nice short story, maybe 15- 20 chapters would be great!!!"
I like the story.. it's very interesting.....
"I like the name in these books.... Interesting to read.... Not too long story but short...... The emotion are realistic.... Can teach us moral values"
