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Intriguing

"So I took my time to read this. In the beginning, it felt slow. But as I kept reading, things started getting clearer. I absolutely loved the writer's style. The descriptions are so beautiful and vivid. I can tell that the writer poured their heart into writing this story. It's very well-written. I only found it jarring how the timeline kept skipping back and forth. But the he more I read, I realized that it was actually necessary that way. Peter, I hope you don't stop writing. You truly have a gift. "

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Incredible

"What an amazing story! I love the way it's structured, and I love the story. The Pana/Vare dynamic reminds me so much of Catra and Adora. Would love to read more in this universe."

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Pana

"I love the storyline, can't wait to continue. I will recommend this book to all adventure and fantasy lovers. Kudos to the author. And I like the fact that there is no explicit sex. Thank u. Update soon, "

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