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What is your opinion?
the enchanted oracle
"its a great beginning to what im posative will be an amazing story. everyone wil enjoy it no matter if you actually believe in the spiritual part of it are you relate it to a holiday fairytale you will enjoy it either way!"
You've got a great set up!
"I really love this story! I know it's just the first chapter, but I'm DYING to know what happens next! It was a great written piece. Really intriguing. One thing I'd like to note is that your dialogue felt pretty crammed. Maybe if you would space it out a little more, it would look a little bit nicer. Other then that, I LOVE IT. I think you are a fantastic writer and wish you all the best in the future!"
