Burning Magic: Lake and Lyre

"This is really good so far! I'm definitely getting some Percy Jackson vibes with all the Greek Mythology references and the way in which it ties into the original world you have. I think your ideas so far are much more creative than what Percy Jackson had to offer, and there's a lot of possibility here. The guy running for president in the prologue is especially intriguing. Even with only two chapters you've managed to set up an interesting story that already leaves the reader with questions. Keep up the great work!"