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Hilariously Naughty...

"Life, death, sex, betrayal, heartbreak and love is all rolled into one book. I love it!!"

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Mafia

"The story should end now"

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Loved the story , the characters and specially the writer

"Love the way the writer gives her opinion about the characters of the novel like a reader , would definitely recommend this novel to all the step siblings romance lovers out there , ps : love the writer of this story felt like we were having a conversation with all the extra point outs she was giving xoxo "

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Loved it

"I love how she grew until herself and it wasn’t rushed like most books be. You said you love us and guess what you love you too!"

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Such a good book!!!

"I love the characters development and the story line!!! I see a lot of people aren’t happy with the characters but I love the author’s writing style and technique!! A nice amount of smut with a great storyline!! I’m loving the series and continue to do you!!! 🫡🥰🥰"

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Awesome

"Amazing book, on to the next one & other stores you wrote after. Love it. Thank you. "

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Interesting

"Pretty good story. A little confusing at times. But overall good"

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Amazing !!!

"Love the story, it is very captivating and easy to read. Couldn't wait for the main characters to finally acknowledge their love for each other. Can't for book 2, and I wish the best of luck for the writer."

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Wow

"This story is worth re-reading. I love everything about this book. From plot line to the way author portrayed the emotions of the female lead. Some grammatical mistakes need to be edited but overall it was a good story. Definitely a 10. "

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Interesting

"Nothing I loved everything about the novel Every single thing "

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Damn damn dam what an exciting book and what a different twist

"I have been reading novels and so far mist of the books have different names as the characters but the plot or story basically the sake. I started to become so bored and this book is amazing.i found my zest for reading again. Superb"

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Intriguing

"This book is very intriguing! I like how the author plays with the thoughts of the characters and questions their sanity. Even though novels / stories on this genre are not my cup of tea, this one really captures me. I could feel the main character's emotions, her joys and her sorrows. I would definitely recommend a read to this story to anyone who is reading this review. The only thing that I can nitpick is the little grammatical errors ( spelling mistakes ) here and there but they get easily overshadowed by the content of the story. Being a writer myself I am in no position to judge someone's grammar when I myself am not that good at it. Overall - 4.8 stars from me Have A Nice Day!!"

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Loved it

"Loved your story so far..its really exciting and and i love the talks between them."

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Possessive

"The writing flows; poetical and powerful voice with the required softness. A good read. Keep it up. Waiting for more. Ps. In kne of the comment I left a typo ( it's Amalia and not Amelia. Excuses.)"

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Interesting read

"Not a genre that I would usually read, but I felt the author does a great job of exploring characters especially when it comes to emotions. There are some moments when you can really feel how raw the emotion turmoil is and for me that was the stand out element of a well constructed plot and tale."

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Spicy

"Good book with a good story but the style of writing is some more spicy. There is always a space for improvisation. But all in all book is good "

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Nrbf

"This was a good story build up. Intriguing "

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Interesting

"The story is indulging as it kept the lead actress in a cocoon for so long making her oblivious to the reality on ground. It is an interesting piece. "

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Boring

"Just one word: BORING"

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