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Interesting Story

"I really liked the concept behind this story with Abnormals and other creatures mixed with the modern world in the future. The story is compelling and interesting, and I enjoyed the varying perspectives. **Notes for the author below."

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An interesting mix of fantasy and dystopian

"The concept of the story was quite interesting. The idea of 'abnormals' in an dystopian universe is quite unique. It's very interesting how we get to see the point of views of each of the characters. Each one of them are different, and their interactions with each other really emphasises the juxtaposition of the characters. I'd like to suggest to maybe slowly introduce the characters throughout the stories. It was quite difficult for me to figure which character was who. Also, i'd recommend splitting these into more chapters. You could really give interesting details of the universe and the plot would run more smoothly. Overall, it was a very good story to read and I believe it has great potential. Well done!"

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