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Running from What?

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Summary

This is a fictional poem I wrote about someone going up against a hill of trials in life. Slightly inspired by "The Hill We Climb" by Amanda Gorman. Let me know what you think!

Genre
Poetry
Author
Meddy
Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 2 reviews
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

I am running.

Running from what?

Running, heart pounding, chest heaving

Running, running, running from what?

My life? My love? My happiness?

Mom is back from the hospital

Dad is gone, trapped in Afghanistan

A relief, a pain

A joy, a sorrow

The hill I am against

Sadness, confusion, panic

Up.

Running from what?

Mom’s chemo finally working

Mom’s miraculous recovery

Up this hill, onward.

Dad’s gone

This hill…

Can I conquer it?

Running from what?

I reach the top.

I can see forever

Heaven, sunlight

An abundance of warmth.

An abundance of life.

I can, I realize.

I can.

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This was a great poem. Many talk about trials they have overcome, but few ever detail just what was involved in the trials they had to endure. And it is that particular journey of climbing which is most important, for each step we take through the hardships makes us stronger, provided we were not defeated by those independent steps we had to take. Powerful message in your poem here. Fantastic.

4 years
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