Inkitt
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Mind-boggling

"Quite a mind boggling story. Good plot with a great lesson. I won’t be trusting my electrician blindly ever again. "

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undetected

"now this was a great story! it was a slow burner at first but when it turned around it did it with a bang!! it was funny but kept your attention with baited breath waiting to see the outcome. I intentionally thought they would find true love in a kinky sort of way, boy was i wrong!! chester was really creepy and marge was sharp as a tack, but emily? i did not see that coming. you were in your element with this one. thank you for sharing."

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Undetected

"An absolutely cracking story! I’d like to have known more of his and her background but that would just have been the icing on the cake. Excellent 👏👏👏"

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UNDETECTED

"Compelling plot - read it all in one sitting!"

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Pamela

"Your humour shows through once again. I enjoyed it and your style of writing. Yes I maybe checking for camera’s in the future."

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Undetected

"This story is hard to get into and boring"

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