What is your opinion?
Enticing
"I really like your writing style, I like how the suspense keeps me yearning for more and it is really easy to follow. Very descriptive and carries so much emotion that makes it very enjoyable."
Interesting, yet missing something
"The first chapter did little to pull me in, but I imagine it's because this isn't the sort of story I would normally be into reading. I think writing a story about a trend, book, movie, show, etc. is a wonderful idea. Being able to reinvent the wheel is always great. I think you did a great job of bringing just enough of Twilight into it, while also making it something completely new. I think you have a solid start, and your writing style is great, but I would want to read more before I gave a complete review. 2 chapters into a longer story can be hard to encapsulate, but I'm excited to see how your writing journey continues."
Sorry
"the plot was just not,.. how can,.. Damn okay so the plot is just not inspirational or original, the horror and the female vampire are portrayed poorly and I could get down with the plot or the characters at all. Sorry, everything else is perfect but I just hate the main character and the whole story surrounding them. I hope you keep writing but I just can't point my finger at what was wrong other than the character and the sheer story surrounding them."
