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"eat me alive is a very interesting horror story"
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"actually, horror isn't my favorite type or genre of book but this story was very interesting and I personally think the author did a great job writing this book. And also the book is in the horror genre and maybe creepy and frightful and all but I'll' like to appreciate the author's writing skills and imagination which I find very unusual and unique. I'll also like to add that I'm sure many readers hope for this horror story to end well. This story is just so amazing and I'll love to give a thumbs up to euscientist."
Eat me alive
"I love this story. It is interesting and captivating right fron the beginning. I appreciate the writer's writing style especually because the words are not too many and unecessary but direct and the events are well expressed. The writer's use of punctuation marks are very good and the content excellent thus showing the writer is well informed. This is excellent."
I loved what I read.
"This is a really good friggin book. I love the way it’s structured. You’re great at building on each character/the setting aside from the introductory description you give to each person/place. Speaking of the characters, I can see the way they move, their personalities, and their motives as the story progresses. Asanga is a very complicated person in my eyes. But one thing that may not be as important, but personally stuck out to me is how she has her daughter call the man she’s fraternizing with (Eberneck) “Uncle”. That’s just wrong. The story becomes more dynamic with the representation of money, and the presence of the church, and how both of these things play a huge role in the governing of their society. It’s a sad thing, but the story becomes even more pivotal that way. When there is dialogue, I’m wondering if the characters speak in a dialect of some sort, or if that’s a grammar mistake. I assume it’s the former, and therefore, I like how this was authentically introduced and made consistent by the author. There are a very few grammar mistakes though, here and there, but those can be dealt with with some revision. Overall, I shall say again, I really like this concept you’ve milked into five chapters, and I’m wondering how Asanga’s curse by Nem Taseng will unfold in future chapters. I also wonder if it will be made worse by the terrible mistakes she has made (sleeping with a married man, being an accomplice to murder, bribery…). Well done."
Eat Me Alive
"The book's beginning is slightly boring, and does not show much potential, but as I went further, I was left aback. It goes from thrilling to exciting and back to thrilling in such a normal manner I'm not really into African belief stories though I'm one, but this is such a captivating story There is space for improvement on vocabulary especially in the beginning chapters but it is quite a nice plot I recommend this book to readers with a mind hungering for more suspense and souls that don't mind imagining African beliefs that can be a little extra "
Not Into Horror. However!
"I'm not going to lie, horror isn't my cup of tea. I honestly argued with myself if I wanted to read it, but I told myself at least read the summary... Yeah that didn't help at all! lol Ants when she pees? Yeah I was turned off and said a hard NOPE... But I wanted to see what happens and how exactly this begins because I am a cat, and my curiosity gets the better of me. On a serious note, not bad actually. Very modern and well paced. Like some horror flicks, it starts out normal and then bam! Not any more. The 'normal' aspects of her life are meaningful, as in they pertain to the story at hand. You get to see her life style and why she is against this suddenly change in her life because she was selected to carry the torch. I mean, if anything you can look at this in two ways. She is the villain here and the 'heroes of old' are getting back at her for not doing her part/being selfish. Or, her family are the villains and she is just trying to live her well built life. Its fitting and you can sense the drama as well as the haunting aspect of the whole thing build. From the moment of her running the woman over I feel like she was cursed at that moment. (Sure, she wasn't driving, but.) Good mix of suspense building with each chapter. I will say I was thrown off at the start. There was a lot explained before we jumped right back into the club that I almost forgot they were there. I find myself struggling with the same aspect. You want to explain such things but don't want to take away from the current scene at hand and drive the readers away. I felt like that cluster of info at the club could have been broken up or spread out throughout the first chapter. Start it off, explain more as she slept in the car, after they hit the woman explain a bit more on why something like this can ruin all she built, etc. Having said all that I could be entirely wrong and this is just my opinion. We have different styles of writing and to be honest horror isn't a big one for me. Overall I was able to follow the plot pretty nicely. I got a sense of who the characters are so far and what is yet to come. Nice build up so far, please keep on going."
