What is your opinion?
Awesome
"The story is great and I would read it again."
I love it!
"I really like this story. It follows the synopsis very well, and I love that your synopsis is extremely clear and concise. In just a few words, I understand what the story may be about, and your chapters follow suit. I am curious to know more about this man in her dreams!! The setting needs to be established in the beginning. The reader doesn't know exactly where Alanna lives, only that she is driving in the beginning, almost crashes, and then goes to her grandfather's house (and so on and so-forth). You only have three chapters, so you've got time to build the individual persona's of the supporting characters, such as her grandpa and her friend. I think the main character will need a bit more backstory as well (which may come later depending on how your story flows). This will help the reader connect on a more personal level to who they're reading about. Grammar was the main thing that caught my eye. Focus on correcting your punctuation (capitalization, periods, commas...), run-on sentences, and repetition, and your story will be even stronger. Other than those things, I love your book, and I will be on the lookout for more!"
