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The girl who lost her magic - (Work In Progress)

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Summary

A girl from space crash lands into a new earth now without magic, and she encounters problems that stop her from going home. She finds herself in the countryside that's completely unaware of magic. She has to learn defend herself, She barely knows anything here. her world relies solely on magic, but now she has to try to fit in with villagers and try to be normal. she would try to get magic by science or technology, but that seems highly unlikely, The village isn't as far advanced as she was from was, meaning she's gonna have a rough time. I wish her the best of luck :)

Status
3yrs ago
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

How it started

As the storm rages lightning hits the side of the ship, she loses control of the ship and the ship spirals through purple fog and as the unknown clouds gets thicker she can't see, all of a sudden she crashes and blacks out.


Who knows how long later she wakes up and the storms gone. She can see that she's somewhere completely different, she sees grass and plants and she doesn't know what to make of it, usually she sees a vivid color an aura around the plants, but these plants are different and have no magic at all, stunned by this she looks at them a little dazed and touches a leaf with raindew on it gently with sympathy. "Little ones you have no color, what a shame I'm sure you would've been beautiful.." She looks up and tries to fly up into the air but stumbles forward and tumbles down through bushes and falls to the bottom of the hillside. She looks around while she's on the ground. "What just happened.. that's strange.." she tries to move but she seems quite hurt so she faces the palm of her hand towards her wounds and shuts her eyes. She tries to heal herself but nothing happens. She opens her eyes and starts panicking "oh no no no no no, you cannot be serious" she gets up and limps to a big rock and leans against it, once she stabilizes herself she tries looking around again and she notices there's something coming. She turns around and has her back to the rock. She extends and waves her arms in the air. "Help! Please someone!" They get closer and they're getting faster and she suddenly notices they're not friendly and the boars see her and are heading directly towards her now. "Oh come on!" She attempts to flee away and hides behind a tree, they keep chasing her and she's forced to keep running or try to, she has two left feet and is injured she doesn't make it far she sees a village though once she gets to the big clearing and she goes towards that. Two hunters notice the boars chasing her and have their bows and arrows out ready to fire at them. Once they shoot that just makes the boars angrier and they pick up the pace. She's curious about the bows as she's never seen one before but she has no time to question it. "Watch where you're shooting!-" Suddenly someone runs and jumps and leads the boars away with a cape and then they both run into a pen and her mysterious savour jumps up the fence. She struggles to climb it but does and rolls on the other side of the wooden fence. She finally catches her breath as the boars are trapped in a pen, she lies on the ground while he locks the gate.

He smiles and stands in confidence with his hands on his hips. The villagers come and thank him. "Oh thank you, i don't know what i would've done!" she sits up and watches them. A little boy, one of the villagers jumps with his hands in the air with a big smile and he catches him and even he thanks him. The girl can't seem to smile but they all seem so loving like a family. "Oh yeah what were those things" she gets up and dusts herself. They turn to her, look at her ripped up jumpsuit. "What was what?" "The things that go like" she suggests a bow and arrow with her hands by making gestures of shooting "a bow?" "A bow.." she thinks to herself.. "Have you ever seen a bow?" He walks closer and raises his eyebrow. She blushes outta embarrassment "i-i have" "hm" he studies her and can obviously tell she's not from here. (To be continued...)

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