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"I always enjoy a simple, classic plot. The writer lets the story move at a nice pace and doesn't clutter it with unnecessary world-building. Sometimes a room and a bed is all you need. Fixing some technical and structural issues would make it easier to read, but I didn't let that stop me from enjoying the story. Well done. Edit The last chapter was unexpected. Nicely done."

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