What is your opinion?
Love the way you're going
"I love the way the story is going and the way you described it. I think you should make a short, or at least short short story of this :)"
A Fan story
"Good story "
A short story
"This was a really amazing short story. Hope you continue writing cause your description is out of the world "
short short SHORT story
"So good! You should totally write more! "
Nice work
"Good story, but very very short. It was like a writing exam. But I truly liked the deep description, and you can add some details too. I enjoyed reading it."
Great writing. Wish there was more.
"Your writing is very well done. Personally, I believe it should be a bit longer to explain more of what is happening. I look forward to reading more of your writing. "
Nice little short story
"The author wasn't kidding when they said this was a short story. Very brief, but still entertaining as an excerpt."
Write More
"That was good. Can't wait for the sequel."
