?Salt or Sugar ?
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?Salt or Sugar ? The beginning

This story contains themes of: assault, depression, homophobia, sexual assault abuse, torture

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Summary

Salt or sugar is about a young women named Zara who has had a bad experience with men in her past and a not so gentle gentleman named Marcus is making it his job to capture Zara why no one knows. Betrayed by her mother Zara was taken and has trauma that will leave scars but she is saved by a women named methia , but is Zara really in good hands ? You will have to find out !

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

DANG IT! Another miserable day on the planet azira . ZORA!! Thats my mom calling me,OH MAN THATS MY MOM CALLING ME!So I'm zora as you may already know I live on azira a small planet west from nevi a larger more populated planet and this is my story.ZORA COME HERE! Coming!!! Okay so that is my mom rallie ,she and my father capa are from nevi so they are not used to the air on azira ,but I was born here so I can breathe perfectly fine,ZORA!!! OKAY OKAY IM COMING! Marcus is here,come greet him . (Marcus:From the planet blitz ,abusive and controlling. ) N-no i whisper , I've meet Marcus once before about last year ,h-he just doesn't listen or respect others, Hello Zora~ I'm dying on the inside as I hear him say my name i look at my mother with a concerned face she looks back at me with a face that says (I don't wanna hear it.) The. I glare at Marcus my face feels numb maybe its because of the fear I'm feeling ! My mom now worried , her face quickly changes to a different expression but I couldn't put together what she was saying.she then tells me to take Marcus to my room .I'm about to faint ,I then refuse to do as my mother had told me to do . My mother looks at me and Marcus grins I'm so scared ,I don't wanna decline my mothers wishes but this is Marcus I'm talking about !!!! I grab my moms wrist and pull her to the hall way just around the corner . I started to atudder as I told my mother that I'm done ,I'm with Marcus, I'm just done . She gives me a concerned look one last time and that look quickly switched to a look I know to well , she started to talk and I couldn't belive what my ears were hearing . Your to be married to Marcus in 2 months she say,WHAT! You and Marcus are to be married , I heard you you don't have to repeat those awful words! I'm sorry I say and as my mother asks me why I tell her 5 words 5 powerful words(Get out of my house !) It echoed through the hallways and soon enough Marcus entered were i had been talking to my mother .My mother then told Marcus something even more heartbreaking and confusing then she had before "Just take her." W-W-WHAT! He steps closer ,i can't move I'm frozen i start to yell H-HELP H-HELP ME !! QUIT YOU BRAT Marcus yelled at me . I don't know whats happening but before I knew it I woke up in a cell ,dressed in all black ,where am I? How did I get here? Come to think of it I don't even remember my name ?! Zora~ your awake, I thought you were dead ~ W-who are you i shuddered terrified. You don't remember me? Your own...fiance?! FIANCE!!! I said shocked and then I looked down my legs were covered in bruses and scars ,what? I tell my self, again o say who are you? I'm not lieing dear , then a female figure steps into the light. Hello ... zora all of a sudden all my memorys come back to me like a tsunami of feelings and worries , all I could do was sit there on the floor . My face was wet and cold I was surly crying, get up said Marcus otherwise known as the man claiming to be my fiance. O-okay I stand up but I feel like I'm about to collapse again , I then realized I'm still crying and as wet tear drops fall down my face I see her ..... MOTHER???!!! I step back until I feel the wall behind me , g-get away I holler petrified I won't hurt you she then says in a weak but assuring voice you promise I say ? I p-promise. All of a sudden I feel a shotting pain from my back to my neck , then everything got dark i heard screaming and crying but it all faded away .....

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