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Cool!
"Wow! This is incredible! Awesome work my friend, great job, it take time to get great ideas and have passion for writing and creating characters on journeys! Awesome job! I just wrote stories myself on this website, Their called “Man In Green” “Blue Samaritan” “Silk Street” “Infiltration” and there will be more if you like them! you can check it out if you want!I Hope you have a great rest of your day. You are beyond talented great job I hope you become a write for films and television one day! 🙂😁👍"
Iron Manimal
"I read 1-16 Both the plot and characters are really engaging. The dialog is witty and just really enjoyible to read and gives me a good idea of the personalities of each character. Even some of the side characters who we don't know a lot about like the Sweeny sisters are interesting and i'm curious to know more about these people and how they deal with their new situation. Leon is delightfully manipulative and you don't know whether or not to trust him but he still kinda draws me in as a reader anyway. Even the main character is actually someone i want to know more about. This is something i would highly suggest to others."
Really fun read!
"Chapters 1-3: I am really enjoying this so far. I was reading the first few paragraphs doubtfully because I really don't have any interest in circuses, but after that I was enthralled. It was so fun watching your characters interact. You introduce quite a few over the course of these chapters, but you immediately gave me a picture of each one of them. Their dialogue was both entertaining and soul-searching. It was highly amusing to read. I think my favorite part in this was where "Scotty" was talking to Lulu, and he was getting disturbed by the fact that she had her eyes rolled back. Every chapter was hilarious and entertaining, and I'm curious to see where this goes. It was definitely not what I expected after reading the intro. The writing was clear and evocative. I don't really have pictures of the main characters, but you've given me such a good look at who they are that I almost feel like I don't need one. Which is very unusual for me, because I'm usually a very visual person. I don't think I ran into any typos or grammatical errors. This is a very clean draft. All in all, this is a great start! I can't wait to see what happens next!"
