4 chapters read
Interesting and compelling
"This story is quite an interesting one. It is evident the thought you gave into writing each word. The plots are also nice as there is a shift from one portion of the story to another, carrying the story altogether smoothly, just like the smooth sail of the ship in the sea. However, I felt there was a need to give a more vivid description. There are times where the characters are introduced but not really well described, nor is the ship well portrayed. It would take a lot more research and time to do that, which is what I personally felt needed to be there. Other than that the story is quite a read"
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