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What is your opinion?

Enjoy this book it a interesting story line and not to explanatory

"Enjoying because good story line and not to sexual to defer from storyline "

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Do what I say

"I loved this story I wish there was more but it’s fine I would read this story all day I never really liked reading things but this story right here changed my point of view "

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Weird but good

"I love the grammar ,so good I hope Damien does not break her heart at all it's a brilliant book. I love it thank you for writing this book "

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Do what I say

"Really interesting story."

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My thoughts

"loved the story but the spelling errors and the grammar mistakes were throwing me off at some points.but other then that the story was really interesting and I loved it. "

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Amazing

"I love that it has deeper inner thoughts inside the main characters head and it’s a very good storyline. It has amazing emotion within it. Absolutely obsessed with it and would like it to become a series."

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So what I say

"Great read!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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Amazing

"I like it keep it up 👍👍"

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Do as i say

"Nice story"

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Do As I Say

"The plot is good but the background to the story is weak. The main character needs dept and her crush is vacillating between sweet and mean. If this is an attempt at High School BDSM I declare that the author is too afraid of the topic to really explore it. Again, the plot has potential but the characters and backstory are weak. I suggest a rewrite. It would make a great story. "

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