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Cruel boys of wonderland

"I luved it. Very different type of book but good. Great job"

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Nice take

"Interesting with a little spice"

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Lost RH Cruel Boys of Wonderland

"I’d love a second one!"

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Wow

"I didn't expect the ending, I really didn't. That didn't mean I didn't love it, I really did. The first book that only took me a couple of hours to read. This is actually the best Alice and Wonderland rewrite I've ever read. I hope your other books are as great. I can't wait to read them while procrastinating with my own writing. That being said, I don't think your cover matches your book, not being rude, just my opinion."

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Lost -RH- Cruel Boys of Wonderland💊

"I actually really enjoyed it!! 🎉 I have a few different versions of Alice in Wonderland movies, TV shows, and books, this reminded me of a few of them, BUT this is a first for the "caterpillar" to be a MC💜, great imagination, MFMMM/MMFMM yummmm, and perhaps 💊Twiddle shouldn't be incharge of the pills anymore...lol😉, Dee is sweet🧡, Anger Management Rabbit/Ryder is the Boss🤍, and Blue is sooo chill..lol💨... yeah, I'd pick them over reality too!! I'm not a fan of how/why she lost her marbles, but I understand there needed to be something dramatic💔 However, if this is to be like SuckerPunch and she's being raped/trafficked while at the "nut-house" then I'm actually disgusted...😠 (hence your warning in the beginning????!!!) ⭐️My Honest Review⭐️ "

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lov it!

"i absolutely love this spin on alice in the wonderland i would absolutely love to see a book 2!"

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Weird but Good

"I like how at first one don't get the characters. But as the story goes one can actually picture them. Liked the story. And would like a part two of it."

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Love it

"I have been really enjoying your stories. Please write a part 2 to this one. "

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Alice

"Beautifully written, it honestly took me a min to piece together that it was a twisted version of wonderland and I love that. It's not often I'm taken by surprise so bravo 👏"

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Lost-RH- Cruel Boys of Wonderland

"Tylenol in my opinion. This was a very well written book. Very, very hot scenes in this book. I loved all the main characters in this book. Definitely a Twist on Alice in wonderland. I thank the author for writing this book. You are very talented author and I love your imagination. Sometimes we have to push ourselves outside of our realm.❤️😊❤️"

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Love it

"Thank you for the update! What’s your schedule on chapters? I may have skimmed by it in comments if you’ve answered someone already. Sorry In advance if so darling. 🫶🏼"

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Lost

"It was a little confusing at times but I really enjoyed reading it ,when can I expect the next chapters ????????? Iam dying to meet red who I think is the queen of hearts ????????? I found this very horny but good ,"

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great start

"This writer has such a strong sense of artistry, world building and writing mechanics that i want to read more. It's an easy read, the characters are likable and the plot, so far, is simple and effective. One of the best written stories I've read on this site so far. Extremely well done."

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Compelling Read

"I was hooked and eager to follow the path through Wonderland to see where it ended. The characters are amazing! I enjoyed the fun play on the classic originals. The writer makes you feel a bit discombobulated as you seek the truth of the story, which makes the reader feel like they might be the one who fell down the rabbit hole. I definitely recommend reading this one! It is a quirky, erotic, thriller and not like anything you have read before."

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Lost-RH-cruel Boys of Wonderland

"Very weird story -need to be high to really understand it"

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Lost- Cruel boys of wonderland

"The story gives a very sensual twist to the wonderland story I know and I am enjoying it greatly."

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