Inkitt
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What is your opinion?

Good just odd grammar.

"I like the plot a lot, but the amount of misused grammar is a little inconvenient. I have to change it in my head often. Not sure if English is their first language or not so I'm not complaining. "

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MY UNFORGETABLE PAST

"The story is nice waiting for the next part"

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Forgotten Promise

"I am trying to figure this out. Keeps you in suspense. Can't wait to see what happens next "

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