What is your opinion?
Amazing!
"Ohh my God! The description of feelings in this book is very interesting to read since it allows readers to immerse into the character's sentimental side. 💖"
Amazing so far!
"I had a lot of fun reading through what is posted of this story! Ellaire is a compelling character with plenty of mystery surrounding her and the reasons why she was hidden away. Lots of great story questions there. You do a great job of pulling your audience into the story right away with the death of Elaine's father and then the death of her brother shortly thereafter. Again, lots of great story questions that keep me reading! What happened to them? Who is behind their death? I can't wait for the mysteries to be revealed! And I'm very intrigued about Pascal too - I can't wait to learn more about his character! Your writing style was great and clipped along at a nice pace with good flow, and your grammar was good too - only a few mistakes here and there - nothing a round of edits can't fix! Overall, I had a really great time with this and I can't wait to read more! Really great job :) "
Promising
"Shows a lot of promise so far (three chapters at time of review) can't wait to see where it's going! "
Very Tragic
"The story starts off on an excellent start. The story is very emotional and I can’t imagine the feeling of being stabbed in the chest. The plot is very good and I feel like this story is going to be a great one! Keep up the good work!"
