What is your opinion?
Fun Read
"I'm about halfway through and found it's a fun read. Love the imagination! The fast pace, explosive action, cool toys (weapons, blades, ships, etc) & fun banter kept me reading. it's not the first story of heroes and evil doers but it's got it's own thing that I can see people loving it. The only suggestion I can think of is the formatting could be tweaked. And to give this story better justice change the blurb to be an excerpt on the story (instead explaining your writing style.) You don't need to explain upfront as I found the story was clear on who is who."
I want more!
"Chapters 1-5: I just read the chapters that you have posted so far, and I enjoyed them a lot. The chapters were short and action-packed, making them especially fun to read. I like the cast of characters that you've created, and I think the names are very creative. I really like the name Zero for your protagonist. I'm interested in knowing more about him and his father. I'm also excited to learn more about Doctor Terror. The name sounds kind of cliched to me, but I can't make any judgement calls on that until we see him in the story. I like the idea of an insane antagonist. The concept of the virus is very intriguing. When I think of a virus, I think of something that you can't see and that causes sickness, so this is a very different take, making a virus an actual monster. It reminds me of the WAU creatures on a video game called Soma. They weren't viruses, but they were basically a manifestation of a computer program, so it's kind of a similar concept. I'm not sure I can picture what a virus would look like as a monster, so I'd like to see some more description in this. :-) I marked it down because there were technical issues with the grammar and areas where words were missing. It needs cleaned up a little bit, but this has a lot of potential. I'm looking forward to seeing if more chapters come out. Great work!"
