kiki-kiwi

Hi! I’m looking for honest and constructive feedback on my story, Perspective.
This is a personal writing project that I’ve been working on and improving over time. I’d really appreciate it if you could read it and tell me honestly what you think—not just about what works, but also about what doesn’t.
I’d especially like feedback on the story, characters, pacing, suspense, atmosphere, dialogue, emotional moments, and overall flow. If something feels confusing, rushed, predictable, unrealistic, or unnecessary, please tell me. Don’t worry about being too critical—I’d rather know what needs improvement.
You don't have to focus only on grammar. I mainly want to know how the story feels to you as a reader and whether it keeps you interested.
This is still a work in progress, so your feedback may help me decide what needs to be changed, expanded, or rewritten.
Thank you for taking the time to read Perspective. I genuinely appreciate your honesty.

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Thank you so much kiki .❤️

Hello, Kiwi!
Thank you so much for the follow! I look forward to supporting each other.
Have a lovely day or evening ahead! 💜✨

114 followers 🥹


I know this might seem like a small number compared to so many successful authors on Inkitt. But to me? It means everything.

When I first posted my story, I had zero expectations. I honestly thought I'd be writing into the void for months.
But 114 of you decided to stay. 114 of you want to read what I write next.

That's not small to me. That's huge.
Thank you for every read, every comment, and every bit of support. You've made a new author believe in the work ❤️ With love,
Kiki 🦋

💖💖Hey ! I just wanted to stop and say a huge thankyou for supporting me ! being a new writer can be a bit nerve wrecking, so your support means the absolute world to me ! Hope you have an amazing week ! ❤️❤️💖

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