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I LOVE IT!

I am definitely going to continue reading this goddamn it is so good! I love the characters and i feel like you have really fleshed out the chapters and make the most of every word that you can. It's funny as well and moves at a really good pace. I feel like there could be some more hesitation and tension though. as well as more internal questioning when her powers first come about. Why does she automatically go to being a witch? i feel like she could question herself and the powers more.

Overall you are a brilliant writer and i look forward to keeping up with your story especially with the dashing Henry now on the horizon.

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Really great!

I really loved how the story started out so strong and vivacious and then started to settle into the plot and the characters start to develop more. can't wait to read more! the references I found comedic as well as Archie's inner thoughts and it made me want to keep reading. Some gramma things here and there and I will say Archie comes off as somewhat feminine in the beginning which isn't bad at all i was just slightly confused about the gender. Other than that I really love it!

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