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Not Bad for my First Story

This was my first short story that I wrote in two days. Although it may be a bit hasty, I am proud of the work I have come up with. It is a compelling story with interesting twists and devices that hooks the reader. I may lack some unique writing style or skills as a novice, but I hope to improve from this strong basis.

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