The Young Foreigner
I have only read 15 chapters of this book since my own currently has 15 and the author and I agreed for a review swap. As far as I have read, I think it's pretty good. The plot is not clear to me yet, but what I loved most was the writing style of the book. The main characters are Yor and Elmeida. Sadly, I found them to be one to two dimensional, and at times Yor was a bit cheesy. But I'm just being honest here. Elmeida was the one who sparked my interest more. I liked how she was the one to control darkness but was a bit confused that she didn't know that since she literally tells Yor that Darkness has been passed down her family.
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I'm not sure what to say about the world building. So far there's only names of cities and kingdoms, no further explanation. But I liked the unique names because they remind me of ones I read about in books like A Song Of Ice and Fire.
Overall, I think the book has a lot of potential. A little polishing on the characters, plot details worldbuilding, and surroundings is needed. Then, you'll have a pretty awesome book.