sweetangel014

Manila

Been writing since 2006. Need friends and potential proofreaders for stories :)

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A good story

I really liked how you've portrayed the world like I'm actually seeing the things that were described in the story. The thrill was there as well as the suspense, especially the tiger scene. Although I may be scared of elephants now but I almost screamed at the open ending and all I think about was "Oh no, did he die or did he end up like Charles?!" Anyway I enjoyed it immensely!

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