Great Writing skill
The plot is very interesting as it creates readers mind to hunger for' what's gonna happen to the blogger and what story could he have posted....
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Your writing is very settling like having a conversation and you are narrating a story., This is a very great quality, so i m gonna apply it in my writing too.
I liked that u didn't use the high literature vocabulary. This makes the book available for all levels of readers.
I believe any art is a medium of conversation, whether it's singing, dancing, acting or writing. So, an artist's personality is always reflected on his art.
U should write more chapters because u writing is like having conversation and that's the best quality any artist can have.
Just go wild, let urself free and write down whatever comes to your mind first. Then it will be like ur sub-conscious mind is creating a story and then it's definitely gonna be a great story.
Would be waiting for update...