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Feeling the loneliness
She left out a few words here and there or put in double words like hear and her together for the word her.
despite that, however, I could feel the loneliness and despair I would like to know more about what the song is supposed to be--a glimpse of a memory. Why was the business man so panicked? Good imagery especially for the feeling of abandonment and futility.
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