Teresa LeBrocq

I love the art of the short story. Most of my written work is 3,000 words or less. Enjoy!

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Awesome!

Awesome! I love your writing style. Lots of cool twists and great ending.

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The Bucket List

You did a great job! I really liked your main character. She was totally believable. It's sad to think about but we could all, one day, be in her position. Life is so short. You really made me think on this one. Keep up the good work!

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Starfall

Of what I've read so far, this story is really good. Dark but interesting. I like the characters. Keep writing. Can't wait to see how it ends.

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We Will Love Each Other

Very well written. Tough to read at times, but overall a great story. I hurt for Ari on so many levels.

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When Breaks the Maelstrom

I love your collection of short stories! They are extremely creative and well-written. Your writing style and use of vocabulary is unique and interesting. Truly, I am inspired! This is exactly what I have been attempting to do. I too want to write a book of short stories that would not only entertain but genuinely interest people. You've done it! Congratulations and please keep writing. You have a gift!

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Fantastic

I love that your world doesn't have werewolves or vamps. You've created something unique. Even the language and writing style is unique to you. Kudos for that. This type of writing involves a great deal of creativity and imagination. Congratulations! It's really fantastic!

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Someone I Used to Know

Nice job, author! Great story. Keep up the great work!!!

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The Gift of the Elements

First of all, the story is great. I do like the characters. I think there were some technical, writing issues along the way but that happens to us all. Keep writing. I enjoyed it.

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Fun

Okay, this story is cool and fun! I really liked the character and plot. It had a cool twist and was a bit different...which is good. Well done!!!!

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Cool Style

I love your writing style and the story was great! Keep writing!

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Great Read

Great read. Fast paced and really scary. My heart went out to the main character. What an ordeal. America's first serial killers! Great job!

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Kimura

Great story! I loved your style of writing. The Japanese culture is fascinating.
Definitely recommend!

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The Wrong Side of You

I really like this story. Great beginning. Your writing style is unique to you...which is great. Keep writing!

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Broken Promises

I read the first chapter so far...and it's very good! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Worshippers Of Pan

Wow! This is a great story! Great job, author! It's exciting, mysterious, dark. Lots of action. A really good read!

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Look Into My Eyes

Well...
It has already been said on all your other reviews...but I'll say it again...AWESOME! A real page turner! This story is very well written! I agree that everyone should read this!

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Soren

Great story! I loved Luna and Soren! Well written. Can't wait to read the next one!

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Death of a Queen Bee

This post is on the 4 chapters I read. I'm sure you will write more chapters for this book later. I hope to come back and catch those too. Honestly, I really liked it. There were some grammatical/spelling things. That stuff is easily fixed. Overall, I liked the story and the character. I feel like you are still in character development though. All I can say is....more. More character. More details. But, you are off to a good start. Keep writing!

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The Other Side

Interesting and unique. I think every author should have a unique writing style...and you definitely do. Can't wait to see what you write next. Good job!

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Secrets and Shadows

Overall, I really liked the story. Fun and whimsical. I thought Frost and Puck were great characters. I agree that our detective needs to show off his detective skills a little more but other than that -- it was fun to read. Great job!

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Die for Love

I really liked the first couple of chapters. It kept me reading. I got a little confused the longer it went on. I did like the characters. I agree with some of the other reviewers. There were a few grammatical things going on, but stuff like that can be easily fixed. I think you did a good job and should be proud!

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Short stories

I'm a fan of short stories. I write mostly short stories too. Some of these are better than others, but overall it is a good collection.

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Well done

Great job! I haven't read the whole series yet, but of what I have read...fantastic! I'm going to go back and discover some of your other work too. Very excited! You are a great storyteller!

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That One Ride

Interesting and fun story. Overall, I really liked it. Great job!

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The Book of Witches

Well written and entertaining. A bit Harry Potter, but I love those kinds of books. Great job!

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Paranormal Delimma

Very interesting read. Great job!

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Magic Underground

Well written and very interesting. Great job!

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Sins of the Mother

Outstanding!! I really enjoyed it. Great writing! 👍 Highly recommend!!

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Nightfall

Great story! Well written.

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The Vampire King

I really liked this story!

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Silence

Nice job! I loved the mystery of it. Kept me reading!

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Box of Bones

Great piece. It was a little bit different which is good. I liked the idea and the story overall.

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