The Big Breakfast club

Hey why r u don’t updating it

Hello guys💕
I know you’re all missing the story. I got injured so I was out a long time. Still on bed rest and sleepy half the time because of meds but I’ll try to write some more whenever I have the energy🫠 I’ve written a little bit of both the stories so I think I’ll post soon. Sometimes I fall asleep writing or reading it so yea it’s going to be a little difficult to complete it but I’ll try my best🫡

I'm going to write this because you seem like you need it based on your comments in your chapters lately. I don't usually comment or review. First of all, I truly appreciate the chapter length. A story I'm reading that also updates once a week typically on the weekend just posted a chapter with 5 pages versus your 41 pages. It was incredibly disappointing and difficult to be engaged in the story with such short and infrequent updates. So thank you for the long chapters! I devour books at an unhealthy pace detrimental to my life. The concept on Inkitt of reading a short amount once a week or even several times a week like it's a TV show I'm waiting to watch every Saturday at 8pm has been a difficult adjustment. I prefer to read one book at a time and all at once but here we are and there are some upsides to this app as well. I do appreciate and understand that this format gives opportunities to beginner writers and all that comes with that. So with that said..

I have read both of your stories and without rereading them to have them fresh in my mind here is what I can say.. I find the complexities of your characters' emotions and relationships, not only with each other but their relationship with pain as well, intriguing. I am not a professional writer, editor or critic and feel unqualified to give technical advice. I suppose there is some repetition. In the sense of repeating something by rephrasing it. In my mind, it seems like you (or someone you hire) just need to "trim the fat." My only other suggestion at this time is to please leave opinions on politics/current events out of your commentary after chapters. Doesn't seem the appropriate place to me. Reading is my escape and I'd like to keep it that way.

Overall, I think you show promise and have an interesting perception of some complex concepts and the emotions that accompany them with an intimate level of detail that I find to be not only accurate but enthralling. Others may find it difficult to consume but this book isn't for them. You can't please everybody, especially in literature. The theme may be a bit niche but growing in popularity. Regardless, it's my cup of tea. So please keep at it! If you have an author/book recommendation of a similar style, please share.

Also, is 'Painfully, yours' complete?

Aloha from Kauai, Hawaii (I never use emojis so this is for you)
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Thank you for your stories!! They are so good!! Especially all the twists. Once you feel like ok it'll be ok boom another problem. 🖤🖤 your stories get me through the day!

XAVIER ❤️‍🔥 ARYA

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