thefeministwriter

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Fascinating premise.

I think the author has woven a beautiful web here, with the acute detailing and dialogue. Enjoyable!

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Fabulously written.

I think you've created a real world here, around Severine and Oliver, and I want to agree with the review above, but if you've ever fallen in love, you'll know that you simply can't control the longing. Loved it!

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Intriguing.

I think the author has made an excellent attempt with this story. The initial style was confusing, because I think there was a little confusion of the tenses, but otherwise, it left plenty of room for the reader to explore.

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Amazing.

I could taste the grit as my eyes took in your words. I hope to one day write as well as you.

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Fabulously written.

I think the author has done an amazing job with this story, the imagination and creativity pulled into making this world is absolutely wonderful. I had some most unfeminist thoughts while reading this (going against my name, hehe) and Orynicus will forever haunt my dreams.

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