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Good work!

The plot of the story is interesting. It started off at a great note with the chase scene. However, I would agree with few other reviews that the pace of the story is too fast. You get to know so many things about Destiny's past and present in the first 3 chapters. Her past can be broken down into pieces and can be brought up throughout the book which might help to keep the balance between her past and present life.

Also her easy acceptance of being a vampire doesn't fit right. It doesn't feel real. You can try to keep the portrayal of the characters as honest as possible.

Slowing down the pace of the story would definitely help. Would love to read the enitre book and will revisit the review once it is completed.

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Good work

The book is easy to follow and I am enjoying reading it. What I liked the most about the characters is that they are portrayed as real as possible. The fact that the female protagonist uses her family connections with the editor makes the narrative real.

What I found a bit difficult to follow was their background/what they were doing before joining their respective courses, especially for the female protagonist. I am at chapter 14 so it might get more clear as the book progresses ahead.

Overall it is a nice reading. I think adding some more humor will make it even better.

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