theindigojackalope

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Intriguing!

This is a really interesting piece of writing. The plot idea in itself is quite unique, and I'm really excited to read more! The only suggestion I'd make is that Vic seems a bit too normal to me. I do know that he's been living in the human world for some years now, but I expected him to be a bit more edgy and less trusting. However, I'm still looking forward to seeing where this goes!
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