thelovesickteenager

Auckland

aesthetically inspired 18 yo

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EXCITING!

The mystery aspect of this story has been a highlight from the beginning. Every chapter gets you more hooked and makes you want to bite your nails. I'm six chapters in, though I have never heard of this author before I see how underrated this story is. Would highly recommend.

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I"M HOOKED!

First of all, I'd like to say your blurb is captivating! I don't think I would have found this story otherwise, so that's a great start! The switches between the past and present POV's were smooth and easy to follow along. Perhaps in the next chapter, I can get to see a little bit of Hayden's character? I missed that in the second chapter when so much was going on. Overall, good transitions between plotlines and you've polished your story's first impression! Looking forward to reading more content from you!

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