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Captivating story

The writing is great and the plot pulls you in, always keeping you on the edge of your seat. You're introduced the villain before you're introduced to the hero, which adds a really interesting touch in understanding the world. The world is built nicely and has a fascinating premise.

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Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

Pulls you in

I love how the story accomplishes a ton of world-building while making it feel natural to the reader, which isn't an easy feat. The writing flows well and the style's really unique, which increases the appeal. Pacing is good, and the stakes are built up well.

I did see a few issues in the grammar. There are some places where the word 'is' should be added. For instance, 'The King looking at the floor.' isn't grammatically correct as its own sentence, but 'The King is looking at the floor' would be.

Overall a great read! Would definitely recommend.

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