inthemall

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Not bad

This story has a lot of potential and I encourage you to keep writing. I am interested however there a lot of errors. It makes the story a little difficult to read however I can see that you have a vision for this story and will gladly watch as your writing improves and you succeed. Overall great job and don't give up!

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I love this!

I love your new poem about coffee I think you have a lot of skill and a broad vocabulary. I love your use of words and am excited for the next poem you write. Great job!

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Pretty good

Pretty good so far. There seems to be a good plot and I'm intrigued. Only a few slight errors so all in all I like it. Keep working hard and watch your writing continue to improve! Great job so far!

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This was an amazing story!

The story was incredible. Very well written with only minor grammatical errors. It had a great plot and was indeed as promised unexpected! I loved it!

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Great so far

It's a very promising story however there are a few grammatical issues. Sometimes the tense changes between present and past and there are also issues with some of the words. A wider range of vocabulary could be used. I would be happy to point out some of the minor errors though. Overall good story, I am enjoying it and I can look pass the mistakes. Great job!

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My review

This book is amazing! So unique and intense. I love it!

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I love this story!

I really enjoy the story so far. I love the characters and the plot and encourage you to continue writing. Good luck!

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