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The Unending Rain is an urban fantasy mystery web serial. Bit of a mouthful huh? The point is it’s a cool genre-bending detective series..

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A nice start!

I've only read the first chapter since that was all that was published at the time of this review, but it's a good start to what looks like a family/teen drama. The main character, Jamie is very relatable. She comes off as someone who has lived her whole life as an outcast and has become used to her isolation. She does not even notice when people reach out to her and try to befriend her. Looking forward to seeing what happens next!

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Unsettling!

Looks to be a great start to a very unsettling story. The setting and future direction are still unclear, but that just gives you more reason to come back and see how things turn out. I like that there isn't a slow build up and you're immediately placed in the middle of a terrifying plot.

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A great start to a new series

This story has an interesting world with a diverse cast of characters and personalities. I especially like the dynamic between Demeter and Ayla. Demeter is an earnest moral character, while Ayla seems to hide her true nature with humor and wit. Looking forward to seeing what happens next and how Demeter and Odium will clash. The only gripe I had was that some of the background explanations ran a bit long and slowed down the pacing of the story. But all in all, it's a great start to a new series.

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