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-“Tragic, how our love and loyalty make servants of us.”- -she/her-

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Fragile

WHEN I SAY THAT THIS BOOK ALMOST BROKE ME I MEAN IT. In a good way. Aiden and Hazel’s story was very enjoyable to read from the beginning to the end and its plot will stick with me for a very long time. I felt Aiden’s stress and worry for Hazel and the author did a very good job with portraying the characters emotions. Hazel just kind of bleeds out at random times which I found kind of weird but besides that and a few grammatical errors here and there, its a good read. I would definitely recommend this to my friends.

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Definitely has potential

Great work keep it up!

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Wow

So devastatingly beautiful. Reading about the twisted minds of these boys and the affect they had over the main character kept me on the edge of my chair through every page. I don’t think I’ve ever been this invested in a book. Wait… what are you still doing here? I’m serious! Go read it!

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All These Colors

You know…..

I said I wouldn’t cry…..

But here I am crying….

In a good way

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Y.O.L.O

👏amazing and I couldn’t put it down after the first chapter. The characters are very enjoyable and although some of the aspects of this book can be cliche, I think the author already knows that. The author has great flow between paragraphs and some minor spelling errors here and there, but nothing too major. Kind of a shame that the sequel is only available on the author’s patreon but I respect the grid I guess. I am looking forward to reading more of your works in the future :)

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