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I am very interested in this story. The only thing I wish was different about it is that we read a little more from Gideons point of view. So far, I have only read one page from his point of view and I wish that I had a little more to read so we can know what is going through his mind. But other than that this story is very great! And I want to keep reading and reading. I was worried about how the marriage would work out with it only lasting a year. But so far I am loving the outcome and how everything is coming together.
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