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The Hills Have Eyes

Louis Freeman was just a regular teen. Well as regular as being a teen could be. Then in two months it all changed. Soon he is on the run from the government and forced to leave everyone he loves, ...

Scifi / Horror by tjk • Ongoing • 1 chapter

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I really enjoyed your first chapter. It captured my attention from the off and really hooked me. I was almost sorry it ended! I Really liked your use of imagery to help me paint a picture in my mind and set the scene of the story. It flowed smoothly and the characters we meet are quite realistic and vivid. You write with such verve and swagger it seems like you are not even trying!
I really hoped you enjoyed writing this as much as I enjoyed reading it.
Honestly one of the best works on Inkitt I have ever read.
Great Job!
Sincerely,
TJK

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