Keep your promises .
I found the plot, twist's and turns intriguing. The story line surprising and unpredictable. However I can not over look the fact that there were a lot of repetitive statements and seemingly redundant story lines. It is not helpful for your readers to have to try and work out if something is relevant to the story or not. I would like to suggest you go back and read it slowly and carefully, to weed out the mistakes and the words that don't need to be there. In order to streamline and make more enjoyable what is otherwise a good book. My sister once told me that If I could read more books, like she did, I would have more understanding of them and how better to write one. I reread and rewrote my book more times than I can even remember, and I bet still there are some mistakes. We all need to do this, it is not a reflection on you or your talent.
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